Finger count

angel wings in snow

angel wings in snow

Fingers flutter
bird-like : mind floods with
vibrant music.

The original version of this haiku, dating from a few days ago, had seventeen syllables; it felt clunky and long-winded. I like this four-five-four version better.

The lovely image is one of a group on Stephi Gardens : Casual Gardening in the Suburbs.

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